Good story but needs editingThe stories are sad， but they are interesting。 I liked the follow up on how the survivors fared later in life。 The book needs editing。 The tense changed back and forth， sometimes in the same sentence。 A marker to indicate changes in scenes/POV would help。 There is an overuse of the words likely and luckily。 I believe a good beta reader would have caught these repetitive words。 The writer kept good momentum in the stories。 It was hard to read them without experiencing Good story but needs editingThe stories are sad， but they are interesting。 I liked the follow up on how the survivors fared later in life。 The book needs editing。 The tense changed back and forth， sometimes in the same sentence。 A marker to indicate changes in scenes/POV would help。 There is an overuse of the words likely and luckily。 I believe a good beta reader would have caught these repetitive words。 The writer kept good momentum in the stories。 It was hard to read them without experiencing sadness。 。。。more